I wanted to extend a heartfelt “thank you” to Valley Players of Napa Valley, California.
My play “Life of Mahler” was a finalist in their recent new play contest and received very positive feedback from their dramaturg and readers (and in fact, my drama “The Last Flight of the Electra” was previously a finalist last year in their new play contest, which focused on roles for mature women).
Describing “Life of Mahler” as “an ambitious and emotionally resonant work, steeped in musical history and personal heartbreak”, Valley Players said that the play “offers a fascinating window into a relationship that has long been mythologized but seldom dramatized with such psychological intimacy.”
Briefly, “Life of Mahler” is about the relationship between the composer Gustav Mahler and his wife, Alma – as told by Alma to a young journalist, Franz Kaufman, whom she entertains to write Mahler’s biography after his death. Valley said “the interplay between Alma Mahler and Franz is especially compelling – serving not only as a framing device but as a crucible for questions about narrative authority, self-erasure, and the power of legacy. We were particularly and universally impressed with the way Alma’s voice gradually emerges as both subject and author of the tale, culminating in a revelation that is less about historical confession and more about emotional re-centering.”
In examining the structure of the play, Valley touted it as “quite sophisticated” – with “the alternating past/present structure, with scenes from Alma’s memory embedded within her dialogue with Franz, function(ing) beautifully as a theatrical device. The meta-theatrical tension – who gets to tell the story, and why – is one of the most engaging parts of the script.”
Additionally, Valley very kindly praised the heightened language used throughout the play, calling it “elegant, thoughtful, and elevated – often echoing the grandeur of the period and the operatic tone of Mahler’s music itself. Certain scenes (such as Alma’s defense of her love for Mahler)… are lyrical and moving, with some lovely, memorable turns of phrase.”
Lastly, the assessment praised my characterization of Alma Mahler herself:
“Alma is richly drawn—by turns commanding, wounded, poetic, and calculating. Her contradictions are what make her compelling, and her transformation from a curated widow to a full-bodied human being is one of the play’s greatest achievements. Franz, too, is effective as both interlocutor and emotional counterbalance—his blend of admiration and skepticism makes for an excellent audience surrogate. Mahler himself, though glimpsed mostly in flashback, is rendered with an intriguing mix of genius and fragility.”
All in all, Valley praised “Life of Mahler” as “a thoughtful, moving, and thematically resonant piece” that “interrogates the cost of genius, the silencing of women’s creativity, and the price of devotion with genuine empathy and dramatic craft” and deemed it “a story that deserves to be told.”
Again, I’m very grateful for the kind words from Valley Players and look forward to continuing to develop “Life of Mahler” – and, hopefully soon, find a home for it!